Have faith in your talent!! This is really good!! And it begs for more! Both a prequel and a sequel! Keep up the good work!

I like this. I agree with the previous comment, you are far too modest! The imagery in this is fantastic, and I like the little bit of humore you put in at the end, even though it remains cryptic…which, come to think of it, I also enjoyed! Altogether, good work!

i agree with both comments above, what else is there to say?
fantastic work =]