Very detailed paragraph, simple and elegant and beautiful. Love it! =] !

Beautifully written, it really captures what (I think) you’re trying to say.

Sigh, you’re making me miss summer even more. Phooey on winter.
LoA

I agree with Amarantine, well done! A few of these strung together with characters and you’re on your way to a novel! Add some drama, and sell it! Great paragraph, it seems to have inspired a few.

beautiful, elegant.

oh that’s beautiful