I think that that was awesome :) I really liked how simple you left it. Not lacking, but simple. Thanks for sharing!
I like that she decided to make things happen rather than wait for them, but I wish you had elongated the piece – let us know who she was, and why she was there.
What’s down that path is left to our imagination, and as ficlet writers’ That could be anywhere from OZ to the moon. Beautiful story.
Beautiful Rain
Alexa ♥
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