wow. that is a different turn then what i had

yah sorry about that lol, I just saw a different way and ran with it!

Thats ok I have always been told that I see things in a different light then most.

what the… is this… I honestly didnt like how the sequel to this story ended up. My opinion is that this is really bad psychaotic story. I didnt like this twist at all!

didn’t mean to make annyone mad or upset, sorry for writing such a crappy sequel

no, its not crappy, i juss took it in the wrong sense. Overall, its a good sequel. Even though I’m contradicting myself but this is what I’m feeling. It was a psychaotic twist that i never saw coming. Good job by surprising the reader.