this doesn’t really explain much, but it’s good, makes you wonder and wanna read more, =)

This is a very well done grabber. Nice intro to an interesting story. :)

told him she would wait for him forever
Grow a backbone. Who knows if this is his only other woman? Or what diseases he may have exposed her to?
The Ficlet itself unfolds nicely, though.

Woohoo Alexa! I was about to say the same thing.

The Ficlet is not too shabby itself. You simply have a character with some issues. They’re fun to do, aren’t they?

There will not be any more sequels to this. At least not by me. I have “closed the book” on this story line. Sorry to any one who was hoping for more on this one. I doubt any one was though. Heh.