You have me interested in why he’s going to the top, and, as ever, your discriptions are amazing.
It’s possible that it’s because this has always gotten to me (how I hate allergy medicine commercials for it!), but you had my eyes watering as I read.
nice. very. but i have to say, there’s a couple of editing problems and that takes away from the overall entrancement (which, btw, is still very high) :)
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