AWWWW !!!!!!!! i mean wow u really threw me off for a moment with the whole kiss and everything, and what she said. wow, actually a whole lot. right now tho, i think i’ve got it. but like…… so she likes two guys right now or what ? or did she USED to like max and the new beau (did he have a name) but when she kissed max she didn’t like him anymore? so then now she would just like the new guy??? please keep me updated on the new sequels!!! thank you!!!!
u really made that 1st lil story get somewhere!

I’m pretty sure the first kiss thing was a flashback—could be wrong, though.

I liked the way you described Monica’s smile.

yeah that was a flashback I think

no it was a flashback. past. you did make this come far. GOOD JOB .