hehe you go get em lass.

:)

S.J.

Nicely detailed. I like the “blood warm” car especially.

awesome!
I am totally hooked.

!! That bit in first person at the end totally took me by surprise, which is great, because you can totally imagine Murray jumping there. unless he knew the anonymous person was there. i love it.

I fully expect something large and black to tap me on my shoulder and whisper in my ear the next time I get in my car.