Great job.

the johnny character reminds me of johnny from the outsiders-specially the low-end crowd type thing.

The Billy Joel Posse just keeps getting bigger and bigger! This DEFINITELY has an Outsiders vibe…

i agree- outsiders all the way

i was trying to make it sound like outsiders (love that book to death) but i don’t want johnny’s name to be johnny (that’s kinda sorta copyrighted) so i need to change it. any suggestions?

I actually haven’t read The Outsiders (I know, it’s on my list), but the Tony and the fighting thing made me think of West Side Story, which is a musical, but this time paired up with Billy Joel, who wrote another musical. Crafty.