hm…some editing mistakes and rushed-feeling…but that’s okay, it’s hard to fit a story in your head into 1024 characters on paper. i like this series.

i m going 2 fix it right now!! I’m so stupid it makes no sense! Ohh God!

wow thts pretty awkward

oooo… tht sucks =[
I LUVV IT !!!

Take out the whole middle bit about the party, focus more on Teddy & her feelings with the kiss.