yeah that wasn’t a good thing for Teddy to do but I feel kind of bad for him, she was pretty harsh

I like the story, but breaking it into more paragraphs would make it easier to read. Nice work.

i wulda been a lil harder on him..
.. but thts me =]

breaking it into more paragraphs would make it easier to read
Amen, St. Chuck.
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Also, stop trying to fit everything into the one space.