ooooh, i really like this.

Makes me want to know what is going on

Me too. :)
Seriously, though: I’m just writing down what these people are doing, I’m not necessarily in charge of what they’re doing. You have Bruce and Anson working on some kind of virtual reality immersion rig (very Wm. Gibson kind of thing) and they bring in a college friend of Bruce’s who happens to be a doctor, Shelly, to assist on the physical end of it. But something’s gone wrong with the system – something’s crashed.
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If you know what’s gone wrong, or what happens next, write a sequel. If you don’t like where it goes (or where it’s been), make a fork. Maybe I’ll sequel you or fork it myself – but that doesn’t mean ‘m “right,” maybe you’ll get the Truth of this particular little world better than I do.
I’m thinking Anson will hide the problem as long as he can, even if he didn’t do anything wrong (and who says he didn’t do anything wrong? maybe he did) – but he might be braver than I think. What do you think?