intense, i tottaly thought he was about to come around, but then, he didnt, I want the next one

ackk! cliffhangers, jerky boys, and girls with no experience…lovely recipe for a good story :) lol

wow-- ty might have a point there…. wow… this is really really going somewhere…. i mean- yea i thought he was gonna give in too but he didn’t.. i mean he did the whole stare at the feet thing and everything… this is amazing. good job.

awww Ty!!!
cmon!!!
plzzz??

grt well written with the whole looking down at the feet thing loved it and Ty come on

Boys. Always dumb. Always around. Aren’t we fun though? And hate to break it to the younger ficleteers, most of us don’t grow out of it.

THX – best comment.
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Soccor – I’m not clear on the motivations of any of your characters.