Great story, hopefully this will someday become a reality. But the last line somehow didn’t fit with the sound of the rest of the story. The idea is good, the wording just sounds wrong.

Finally, someone who isn’t totally denying global warming. I do agree with Chuck, however. The words are a tad off.

really good story, however, though i’m not one to talk, I’m no “Laine P. Grey” (jk), i do agree with the above comments

I liked the last bit, it’s what makes the potential for a sequel. I was smiling at all the ideas until the colonization of other planets. That doesn’t quite seem right to me, so I’d probably support the Rebellion.

uch it sounded good but i had to cut it off cuz of the character limit. k ill see wat i can do…