i like this.
nice job! i like the thoughts behind this. sometimes i feel like people treat me like a barbie doll and forget that I’m a human not a plaything.
I like it very much! it flows and it’s punchy without being ‘in-your-face’ feminist.
I had to read this a couple times because it really stuck with me. I like how you captured such a voice with a catchy, feminist tone, the last line really sticks with you in the end.
I love this poem! You have a great writing style, and the last line was great. Barbie is lame!
I love it. :)
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