Aww! A couple of sentence flow issues, but cute ficlet.
cute :)
aww, so sweet
it reminded me of something i have to do thanx loved it one sentence was off but it was great
It’s needs more sentence variety. Bit choppy at times.But, all over a really sweet story. I’m loving the last sentence. (p.s. flugelhorn is beast)
It’s needs more sentence variety. Bit choppy at times.But, all over a really sweet story. I’m loving the last sentence.
(p.s. flugelhorn is beast)
Storykeeper of Fae
Ms Kit Kat
Kiarra
KittyKatLover
[ wall.doll ]