its good in a “i want more!” kind of way. i’m not sure if the appeal ends there though?

more please!

really interesting. Great description of the stars as well as the food in her stomach.

Iiiinteresting…

I love your descriptions, keep these coming please!

Very ‘Final Fantasy’ feel to it, maybe just cause of the sword in a spaceship. But definitely like the little suggestions of facts before and after the present ficlet. And a nice, little portrait of a troubled, struggling soul.
LoA