but how did they change her life? 2 life changing events but neither seem to be changing it much

i’m liking how you describe the horrors of public education. hopefully these life changing comments somehow develop into a nice story twist.

i think i see a pattern here…

i agree with blueyedwonder – i saw a pattern.
you could do sequels of these all the way through 12th grade. it wuld be quite an interesting series =]
keep it up =]

…stuck…

this is a true story. keep goin, this is great!