idk.. not my best?

i though it was a pretty good twist actually nice job, I give it 3 stars no offense but its good

that is an interesting twist. i’d like to see where you go with this…personally, i’d be stuck.

Wow interesting. I agree with blueyedwonder totally. Pretty good though. You simply must write a sequel!

Great job. Hope you like my addition.

“we are one” nice