its a little too descriptive, ya kno?
like, tmi [too much info]
but it has a plot, pun unintended, and its good.

I LOVE THIS ! and i don’t care what One Time One CHance says, i like the overly descriptiveness of your writing. It makes it funny =] SEQUEL !!! >.<

Thanx 4 the comments. glad you thought it was funny.

Omg luv it!! haha i was laughing out loud, but in a good way, deff sequel!

thx Lito i’m so glad your laugh was a good laugh.thx for the 5 stars!

lol that was funny :) Flame Flond, lol…