nice plot, but u need to rephrase the second line, it sounds like she’s saying that her boyfriend is dead. otherwise – nice job =]

there ya go

mm. bettr =]

kays. Hey, send me a note when you get back on…

rather short, you had plenty of space for more. the sequels are good.

Agree with Kermit.

did you both not read the title?

Nosy son of a biscut. lol lmao.