I love onion rings.. good choice. good ficlet.
Cool internal dialogue.

I like it! Chicken wings, to cliche. Lol!
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I like this story. The dialogue with himself sounds funny.

This guy’s funny. And so very casual. Restaurants make me kind of goofy, too. I like this. I like him.
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I love this story its so true.

I like this story , the dialogue is good!

haha i really like this!
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He’s a very interesting and relatable character.

Very funny. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

awsome personallity for the waitress