Not bad, though I think it feels a little rushed, probably a consequence of that 1024 character limit. The boy’s appearance is either odd (why would a stranger caress her and she be okay with it) or somehow magical/fantastical (in which case it makes a bit more sense, though some other mystical or fantastic detail may have helped). So that’s me rambling, not like I’m a pro or anything. Really, I thought it was cute and thoughtful.
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