Very different kind of story, sort of in the vein of Being John Malcovich.

whoa.. teenage fantasy!

ugh!! thats just…..too much left for the imginaton!!

ewww.. he eat her! aaaaa
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Oh GEEZ !

Talk about a twist to the story!

Ugh…

There goes my appetite…

Good story, though!

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Ha! A waitress that takes you to the food instead of bringing it to you. That’s funny.

wow. ugh eww. i cant believe he… ate her

Gross! I was grossed out by the time she took him to the kitchen, and then…he ate her! That’s kind of funny in a morbid way.
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I lol’ed at this one. Brilliant continuance from the previous one.

In case folks haven’t yet guessed, this story was born from my misreading the title of the original ficlet, then double-taking…then deciding what I had originally misread the title as would make an amusing title for a follow-up ficlet. The whole thing kind of went on from there.

hahahahaha! this was funny! i liked it! it made me shudder but i laughed. nice=]

haha, thats a twist on this story!

haha, thats a twist on this story!

haha did he just eat her!?

Yeah, this is rather weird.

i’m speechless but i’m going to continue to read so it must be good right?
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