love is prison. loving someone who doesn’t love you back is being prisoner. i love it, you expressed youself very well.

there’s so few of them, but you can’t see there’s so many…so many demons to overcome. i hope it all works out. sigh

Its heartbreaking, but set to music would be an awesome song.

i love it! it kinda makes you think, you know? but whatever! its awesome! keep writing

ooo it’s very descriptive, very well expressed =]

awesome poem !

that was beautiful. im glad to know someone has the same romantic views. keep writing.