Haha, left his bimbo at daycare…I love it.

it is enjoyable,,put me in the mind of my dad,, he wasn’t a bas,,, lol, but he could pick a fight in a room all by himself

i agree w/ batak, lol, and i saw your fave book- odd thomas killed (killed = beyond awesome, fyi)

the whole Odd Thoams series is awesome – beyond awesome… gotta love the English language. esp Forever Odd!

Great story. I love the last paragraph.

It was pretty good. I would have added more descriptions.

i like it

Very good names for characters, my last writing I had to come up with names, and they sucked.