You gotta sequel this! great naems and characters.

Funny take, I like the “Are they brandishing pitchforks and torches?” line.

Great descriptions.
I agree with THX – the way that line is written, it seems Dr. Reinhardt doesn’t think it’s a party until they show up with weapons. Excellent.

Mad scientists and peasants with primitive weapons is just such an excellent combination…

excellent pacing, nice development

I like this…can’t truly express why, I just do. The pitchforks and torches line was funny…
“And scythes”…funny as well.

this is awesome…..very mysterious….i hope there’s a sequel =)

that is a very good story too bad you never sequel it

Is the butler an eyegore?