Very nice, I wouldn’t have used the “beat the living….out of her dad” line, especially not in all caps. But it’s still good.

well at least he’s halfway mature now. but fyora’s right, i would have used the “beat the living….out of her dad” either. a lot of people won’t read it if it’s marked mature.

kk i’ll edit it out srry :/

edited it woowoo! :) still in all caps, got to show emotion

Sequel prettyprettyprettypretty please!

very brave boy, this Tom is.
LoA