this is very good, does she suffer from mental retardation? it gives a good representation of the bittersweet innocence that reminded me of “to kill a mockingbird” or the beginning of “flowers for algernon”.

Very sad and poignant.

very sweet story, kinda sad, well written.

This is sad btu, I understand it. It makes me feel kinda bad too. I like it though.

Lovely descriptions – it feels like you’ve got right into how it would feel to have the kind of difficulties this girl has. That last line is perfect, too, with just a hint of sadness behind it. Great work.

=( That made me feel sad. But because it did, that means you did a great job with characterizing the way she perceives her surroundings.

I like it.