not a very good sequel and REALLY confusing. I had no idea what u were trying to tell me

Hmmm…. I think the dialog moves the story along nicely. I like what you’ve done here. I think it’s well written and leaves a lot to the imagination. Well done!

great dialouge. still think Sam was abducted.

I like the way you wrote Sam’s dialogue. I could hear him slurring as I read it.