Ah, ya’ made my guy a coward? I guess not everyone’s a hero.

ahh thats sad!! still, i love that you show his faults. not all characters can be perfect selfless little heroes.

Thank you for the lovely comments, I’ve been reading up on heroes at school these past weeks and this ties in perfectly, I like that they are not perfect, it’s realistic.

Almost forgot to rate!

He just seemed like a cad with a one track mind.I didn’t see him as the heroic type.

:):):) Oh this one made me laugh! At least he knows his faults.

aww.. touching story