Much better than the original.
It’s interesting how you ‘humanized’ the Nazi by having him care about a strange toddler.

Always difficult to humanize a Nazi, I always say.

Ok same charatcers, much better, considering what you had to work with. thats how you tell a story wtg Fyroa

this was very nice…pardon me for being rude, but it is much better than the original.

I didn’t understand the original at all but this version is very good.