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This is lovely. Absolutely lovely.
I have nothing more to say.

fav line- considered his life his own to mess up, as he was sure he was doing tonight

wow, great read

Terrific!

Nice continuation. Love the part about fate.

hehehe. i NEED to know what happens next!!…so i shall read the sequel after finishing this comment :)

Nice tension. Really makes me wonder why he’s hiding from her so much.