I liked the concept, but the overall story had an awkward tone to it. The “Hallween” bit was rather confusing.
sorry you found it confusing and awkward. harsh lol, not sure what i can do to improve it though, was meant to be heartwarming, guess it wasn’t. thnx for the 3 stars.
I liked it, I thought the “Hallween” part was cute :)
Laine the Grey
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