ohhh that was good.

owwwwwwch!!!! where can you go from here???

“almost not breath” for a little longer and linz can be rid of u!

soooo needs a sequel

ooh more more more plzzz

okay, yeah, uhm, sequel or i will like, die.
boom.
u killed me.

Good. Now dump the other one.

Okkk, all the people that are trying to continue your stories need to like, quit (no offense) bc they kinda ruin it for me personally. I love all the stories you wrote and i think u need to continue. REALLY .

I agree with unknown and not discovered… gosh thats a long name… anyways I do agree, continue please!!!

come on, i’m dying for the story to continue

wow. that was really good. nice way to end the story. i like the “retreat from war” analogy.