i like how you’ve continued this story. i really want to know what the plan is, so plzzzzzz write a sequel soon!

i like how in one set of sequels, she’s trying to kill him, and in this one, she’s using him to her advantage. interesting.

i like the one loong word….PaigeIgottagotothebathroom. good stroy

Oh, wow. Cool. Someone wrote a sequel on my work.
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5090- your grammar needs work, but otherwise, I like where you took the story. I had written a sequel that went almost in the same direction.