Excellent! Let’s keep this puppy going!

really cool take on willy wonka /charlie choc factory all grown up.

Wow, what drew me in was the title. I really liked this.

Find the elevator; save the world. Very fun.

“alphabetically inclined amorphous blob” – loved that line! =D

by the way, you have great titles, really piques a reader’s interest

i agree with Amaryllis, that line is hilarious. this is a great series, i love reading them!!

“We find my elevator and save the world.â€?
Awesome. Will Claire be nearby?

Haha, I’ll go for a Peter Petrelli…

Elevator like boxes are often handy in world saving it seems, and always more than what they appear…..