Ouch, the perils being a chocolatier. Very fun, lots of levels and details. ‘Satl-Peppard’….funny married name too.

Haha, yeah, that name didn’t really occur to me (not to mention I couldn’t remember much of the book/movie anyway)
Great story.

Your writing style is really quite amazing. I love it =)

this is pretty nifty. loving the wonka stuff

love the veruca salt-peppard allusion. and this is hysterical. what happens next??

What happens next? Anyone can join in! In the earlier days of this site, a ficlet might generate a half-dozen sequels, with the best ones generating new sequels. I’d love to see where someone else takes this, and maybe jump back in when others add to what Batak Beatrix started!

Very Funny, Batak Beatrix sure started a good ficlet

I love seeing the side effects of all that fun.