ok, so an elegy is a piece of literature that expresses sorrow over loss in the past. and kennings are metaphoric compound words. Both are characteristics of old English literature.
A raven-harvest is a corpse
A blood-ember is an axe
And brow-stars are eyes.
sooo yeah i used 2 rare techniques

nice job!!! and no, that’s definitely not being greedy or anything. i really liked this.

Quite lovely and kennings is a new one to me, so good job.

you found a rare one,ever heard of kennings wtg. it was short and made no sense to me… but your explaination was good