wow, great writing! i really loved this!!!

Autumn is sad, because summer is over, but has in store something new, different, like your ficlet, you captured the feeling that the seaon brings

this makes me sad, but its beautiful.

VERY GOOD

hey you are better than we reacted. but if i might add a bit of john perkins type criticism. you are such an icredible poet that you should read over your similies and metephors and weed out cliches like fiery leaves because you could create way better than those who you stand on the shoulders of, you are good.