Ooh, now that was a good, food filled drama, really taking the food theme to the next level, since it’s integral to the plot and not just slipped in around the plot.

thanks, i was trying to keep away from that whole slipping it around the plot thing. glad you liked.

Quite heartbreaking too.
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Anything to keep my mind off the cheese stick in my pocket
- I hope that’s just a stick of cheese, not a fried mozzerella stick, because that sucker would burn. Regardless, remove it before laundry day!

cool story. and Alxe your comment could be the start of its own ficlet

I’m a tad late in joining in on the fun of this apparently so well received competition

so i shall use my creative genius to comment this

i thought this was wonderful
sweet and simple but actually quite layered

i thought they were both chicks to begin with until the end so…i guess thats a good thing…im not quite sure qhy but im sure you’d rather it be a good thing than bad

i really liked this

read some of mine if you have the time and waste your creative genius on commenting mine

haha, explicitely saying they were trading outside of the cafeteria. loophole!

i agree with artistsrunwild – i thought they were both girls till the end :-/
but who’s to say that it wasn’t a cleverly placed twist at the end? =]
nice work =]

Who’s to say that they aren’t both girls.