I like this one I’ve never written like this before

Awesome ficlet , love story turned Jaws. sad ending.. the picture sorta makes it a lil comical and the title. I liked it. I like the way you write. never knowing where its gonna end.

i liked that,,what a sad way to end a proposal lol

sad ending, but i liked it.

I thought that it was going to be about a guy who had really looked at his girlfriend for the first time.

heehee. thats funny. i know, a lil bit sadist, but the irony was still amusing.

Great picture, great story, great ending. Great!