Ms. Kit Kat,
I know you have a limited amount of characters to work with, but I want to know where this is going. I’m not sure, but there are a lot of places it could go, so be sure to develop your characters with some sorta vibrancy, and your plot with follow.
I did enjoy this story, because I can relate, I have been that girl.
Best of luck ,
Jesi

I enjoyed the story my self