A Change of Pace- Prepare the Masses

we just finished reading romeo and juliet toda in my english honors class. how different the story would have been if juliet had gotten pregnant…

Good use of subtext here.

better pregnant then dead… good ficlet, very contemporary

thanks! i had this dream, and it freaked me out just enough to write a ficlet (nope- still not pregnant though, not for a long, long time)

Nicely written ficlet – this is what it’s all about. I’ve been tempted to write stories about dreams I’ve had as well – my dreams are too strange to write about though. The last one was about a race war in Chicago.

Lovely little piece, dramatic yet self-contained with a nice reveal. I wound up writing a novella because of an odd dream, so I’m all for using nightly visions as a source! And really, Yoda, yikes.

Wow, it was marvelous.

That’s really cool and different. I like different.

Nice, I liked it a lot. Great tone, it was interesting.

very nice! agree with musicxhearted and kermitgorf and probly everyone else…very nice!