ficlet Nirvana. hope you like my attempt at historial drama.. with some comic relief..

The line from the actor Harry Hawk is historicaly accurate, doesnt make sense to me either, guess ya hadda be there.

glad I wasn’t there, lol. good story

A lot of spelling mistakes. It seemed rather choppy.

I fixed the spelling mistake, don’t know what to do about the choppiness.. Guess I won’t win the challenge. Oh well… cant please all of the people all of the time, someone once said..

I think it flows really well, and I like your take on it. Hopy you win :)