That was hard to follow.

i agree with Alexa…
that was a bit confusing.
but it’s very good writing

no. too much of a change of mood—from soap opera to deep and depressing? not liking it.

how is that mature ???? and it is just a tiny tiny tiny bit hard to follow but i kinda got it !

Love it… I really liked how you described the yearning for the person…yet being afraid of being hurt again. I can totally identify with such a feeling. Very raw.