Wow, that was a ramble. Plus, they’re 13!

I agree with Alexa and pluse it sounds wayyy too cliche no offense. Way too Romeo & Juliet

ramble would have been better. no offense, i’ve been reading some baad ficlets tonight- most of them, which is rare.
dont mean to pick on your writting. you need to space the paragraphs with the Enter key. might make it clearer what your trying to convey.

SHES 13 !!!!!!!!!!!! I AGREE WITH THOSE PPL ABOVE . YOU SUCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU RUINED THE SERIES !!!!!!!!

i like this better than the rest of the series, it flows better. but your = possession, you’re = you are