Comments on Oh it is love.... by LovedandAlone

Alexa ♥

The way both people speaking ran together into one paragraph was just . . . {shudders}.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:08.
Kermitgorf

more like a poem. lose the quotations, they are missing in places anyway
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:08.
-LadyInRed-

who uses the word “shambles” so much, or to think of it, AT ALL !!! nice plot though.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:08.
I_heart_soccer15

THEY ’RE 13!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ’RE A BAD WRITER !!!!! STOP TRYING TO SEQUEL OTHER WRITERS WORK WHEN YOU RUIN THERE STORIES !!!!!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:08.
FlirtingWithaBrickWall

i frown upon sex at 13, or anytime before marriage, but it’s not nearly as bed as 1heartsoccer puts it. the girl who started the series writes like a 10 year old. no kidding.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:08.
Phosphate11

well first FlirtingWithaBrickWall, i agree about the whole frowning upon sex thing, i think that LovedandAlone is just trying to make them older than they really are. Also it’s IheartSoccer x10, not 1heartSoccer (sorry just little things like that annoy me.)
but also I disagree, Music2MyEars29/SoccerIsMyLife had a very good series going and I really enjoyed it. I think LovedandAlone runied it.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:08.
Phosphate11

oops i mean TottalyNotBlonde/SoccerIsMyLife
(sorry my bad)
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:08.