haha my sis can’t smile either. it looks like a scowl when she tries. i love this ficlet…the intrigue at the end leaves me wanting a sequel. also very good descriptions. very nice!

Well, that’s a heck of a start…very intriguing.

i loved it too much to just let it stay unsequeled
i hope you dont mind

feel free to tell me if i ruined it

I love the intrigue and the descriptions.