Rockstar by Nickelback =]
(cuz we all just wanna be a big rockstar; livin hilltop drivin fifteen cars; the girls come easy and the drugs come cheap; and we all stay skinny cuz we just won’t eat..)

im impressed a very good sequel. everything else i read tonight looked written by a 5 yr old, so i was glad to read yours, quality writing and dialouge

I like the song reference at the end. Nice little layered piece with urgency, mystery and romance, I thought.

He’s got black eyes, not dark brown.

I like that she didn’t just give in; she sees his vulnerability and responds to that.

sorry to break it to you….but only in the USA do people dial 911………should fix that up beause its a good story